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网络上看到好的段子,出去兴趣,自己翻译了一下,请大家指点,修改不当的表达之处,谢谢。

“世界并不公平,男人步伐大,前行快。要想不被落后太远,女人只能更加辛苦。 责任中不放弃自我,付出时坚持成长。可以短暂地依靠他喘歇,却不能一劳永逸地靠着他安享。记得,一丈之内他是你的夫。落后太远,他便牵不到你的手。这是与子偕老的距离。”

There is no fair in this world. Man takes a larger stride with a faster speed. Woman has to devote more in order to not be left behind too much. Maintain self-esteem while keep responsibility; give while pursue a constant personal growth. You can rely on him to grab a brief rest and take a breath. But you never want to place all stakes on him and assume you can start to enjoy a relax life forever. Keep in mind, he's only your husband when he is in sight. If you were left behind too much, he was unable to hold your hand and keep the oath. This is the distance which forever love resides.

提问于 31 Jul '14, 19:12

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编辑于 31 Jul '14, 21:41

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Hi, Kelisdm, Welcome!

(31 Jul '14, 21:23) Haibin Haibin's gravatar image

Some thoughts:

  1. "there is no" means, well, no, null, zero, naught, which isn't necessarily true, even in terms of "fair".
  2. "fair", is seldom used as a noun, except for the meaning of "a beautiful woman".
  3. "Man takes..." maybe changed to "A man takes...", or "Men take...", same for woman in the second half of your sentence.
  4. "devote", I'd prefer something like "effort",
  5. "left behind", I'd use something like "to catch up"; personal choice, of course.
  6. A subject is expected for the next sentence begins with "Maintain"?
  7. relax should be relaxed?
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回答于 31 Jul '14, 21:39

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